You show great promise, BUT...
...you need more DETAIL. Watching two stick figures fighting in front of a white background is visually boring. Also, the text needs to be enlarged if you want people to be able to read it. Finally, good spelling and grammar make it much easier for people to read, especially at the speed you had the messages coming and going at. Remember, we don't all use your particular slang!
Brilliant animation, iffy plot...
My summary sums it up really (there's a surprise). The animation is of surprisingly high quality, but you really need to get someone slightly funnier to write for you.
Look forward to seeing you make more (and developing a sense of humour!).
I have to be honest, I like the intro to your animations. However, the same can't be said for the 'animation' itself.
Fair enough, the same pose is used for continuity, but for christ's sake stop using 'Sex on the Beach'. It's completely irrelevant and the animations could be made much more humourous by using more relevant tunes.
For example, the song 'Who do you think you are kidding Mr. Hitler' would have been much more relevant to the English day.
Who do you think you are kidding Mr. Hitler?
If you think we're on the run,
We are the boys who will stop your little game.
We are the boys who will make you think again.
'Cus who do you think you are kidding Mr. Hitler?
If you think old England's done?
Mr. Brown goes off to town
On the 8:21.
But he comes home each evening
And he's ready with his gun.
So watch out Mr. Hitler
You have met your match in us.
If you think you can push us
We're afraid you've missed the bus.
So who do you think you are kidding Mr. Hitler?
If you think old England's done,
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